4Word Communication

Comments

William,
All three of your critiques were excellent. You provided positive feedback, as well as solid and concrete suggestions as to how each of your three peers could better enhance their blog. Be sure to add this well-written and insightful constructive critique to your blog.

Well done!

-Instructor Freemont

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For the 400 Years blog there are a few suggestions I would recommend to help improve your blog. The purpose or topic of your blog is not quite clear from the title. Perhaps you could either give the blog a new name or expound on why it has its current name. Also, you could use more content on your blog such as some of the written works from this or past courses. More information on your profile and a nice picture in the header may add some flair to the design.

-Dolly Burgos

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It needs way more content and structure. The second blog I reviewed was “400 years” by William Kincheloe. In my opinion needs much more content. The content that is there seems to get lost in the background. I would recommend making the background less cluttered maybe a solid color. Lastly the title “400 years” does not provide the reader any clue what the blog is about. I would add a description under the title, which will tell the reader what the blog subject matter is.

-William Gulya

4Word Communication

Monday, May 21, 2012

The ides of March